writing

FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION- Nick

Purpose: to describe

WALT: create content with clear and interesting details

Success Criteria:

• Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm words or ideas)
• Interesting beginning and ending
• Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
• Stays on the topic (of describing for the reader)
• Uses the present tense

Quick write

When I woke up I could see the most scariest world there were trees that had no leaves. A few hours later I found a dungeon and it had dead bodies everywhere and I could see ghosts coming out and even some tuning in to zombies To be Continued? later I was getting surrounded by zombies and ghosts I saw a portal. I went in the portal and it brought me to another destination it was my old house. Later I found people and they took me to the king. The king was really nice he said "what is your name?" I said "Merlin" he said "perhaps we could call you young Merlin". Later the king gave me powers but when I woke up I didn't actually know that I had powers. After I went outside the dungeon there were people from my clan they said “use your powers" I said what powers?" They said "think about powers" I started thinking about powers and I suddenly popped out of nowhere and I started fighting suddenly me and my clan won. I went back to the king and he said "you have achieved your goal you have got a new ability you can now heal yourself and other people."

The End

IProud#2

I am sharing this because I learnt how to do Simple, Complex and Compound sentences.

My Best Learning

This is my writing Workshop prove it.

I am proud of this because I tried to do the complex sentence better

My biggest challenge was trying to get my complex sentence done fast.

Workshop Prove It

I learnt how to do simple compound and complex sentences.

Here is an example:

Simple: It was time to bath

Compound:It was my brothers turn to bath but he couldn't.

Complex: Even though my brother couldn't bath, he could still play games.

Reading

I am sharing this because this task is about the words that I didn't know.




 


In this reading task I was writing the words that I didn't know and the meaning.

Reading Task Tigers

I am sharing this with you because I did 5 good questions.

I am lerning to ask more and more questions.

Tigers - Term 2, Week 1

We are learning to ask questions about what we read. Start reading “The Really Rotten Pirates” and formulate questions using the question grid.

Success Criteria:

• Include at least 5 questions
• Questions will use the question grid or question cards

Extension: See if you can answer your questions that you came up with.

What do they eat? fish 
Where do they sleep?anywhere
Why are they called the rotten pirates? They're not clean
Why do they have to wake up so early ?because they do work
What is the parrot's name ? Biscuit

Blood story

I am sharing this because I liked this story. I wrote it with Miss Hill at my writing group.

Blood story

One extremely hot day I was playing on my MGP scooter outside my house.

Mum said “lunch time”.

I went in and had homemade pizza and started playing games.  It got to hot outside and then.

I started playing games.

5 Hours later.

Finally it was nice and cool and now we could play. Bhrt let's do some tricks.

He came he did a 1.80 me to.

I did a 1.80 suddenly I wasn't watching what was around me.

There was a crack in the path in front of me.

I slipped and a rock crashed in my eye and my eye got swollen. Mum heard me screaming I was absolutely filled with pain and I was saying mum mum mum.

Mum came brought me into the house and I was still crying hard core.

Later Mum gave me cream to rub on my eye and I got all better.

IPROUD

My Best Learning

This is my letter

7.3.16

Mrs Ramsay

Parkvale School

Hastings

Dear Mrs Ramsay

Thank you for taking such care of me because my class was gone to camp Omatua\Weka. Sometimes I was going to the library because you let me go there. Thank you for letting me in your classroom and especially thanks for teaching me new things about your classroom and thank you for being such a good teacher.

My favourite part about coming into your hub was typing club because I learned a lot about typing fast and slow.

Your sincerely

Nick Dugh

I am proud of this because I worked on this so much that it took me 4 days to finish.

My biggest challenge was the right spots fitting the words

My first blog 2016

HOLIDAYS



Hi guys my name is Nick and I am going to talk about my holiday. The reason Im going to write this is because I had a 2 mothes holiday and I had a fun holiday Iv got 1 reason about this avesome holidays.The reason is I went to splash planet and I had lots of fun and I went In the cave and I couldent see and It was dark and scary. Bye guys Iv had graet time with you bye bye. By Nick.