Blood story

I am sharing this because I liked this story. I wrote it with Miss Hill at my writing group.

Blood story

One extremely hot day I was playing on my MGP scooter outside my house.

Mum said “lunch time”.

I went in and had homemade pizza and started playing games.  It got to hot outside and then.

I started playing games.

5 Hours later.

Finally it was nice and cool and now we could play. Bhrt let's do some tricks.

He came he did a 1.80 me to.

I did a 1.80 suddenly I wasn't watching what was around me.

There was a crack in the path in front of me.

I slipped and a rock crashed in my eye and my eye got swollen. Mum heard me screaming I was absolutely filled with pain and I was saying mum mum mum.

Mum came brought me into the house and I was still crying hard core.

Later Mum gave me cream to rub on my eye and I got all better.